Sunday, November 24, 2013

Week 13 - November 25

Meet in Sangren 2330, the computer lab

Thoughts on this clip and news story

Vocab

Verb Tenses 
* In groups of two or three, write a short paragraph/narrative/story that uses at least 6 of these tenses.  This needs to, therefore, be at least 6 sentences long.  Don't try to get too fancy- your sentences must be grammatically correct.  Your group will share these with the class.

Workshop Second Rough Draft
* Pass your draft around to your group members.
* Read out loud a draft that is not yours. 
* Listeners: Listen carefully to the draft.  Make notes on the draft where you detect grammar errors.  Also, make note where you are confused by something.  Make notes about places where you need more information or detail.
* Once the draft has been read out loud, discuss the paper and ways it could be made stronger in a group.
* Discuss the changes that were made between the first and second draft.
* Repeat this for each group member.

APA Format
Formatting the pages
* 12 point font
* double spaced
* name
* page numbers
* title

Option 1:


Option 2:

Basic in-text citations
* Ordinarily, introduce the quotation with a signal phrase that includes the author’s last name followed by the year of publication in parentheses. Put the page number preceded by "p." (or "pp." for more than one page) in parentheses after the quotation.
Critser (2003) noted that despite growing numbers of overweight Americans, many health care providers still “remain either in ignorance or outright denial about the health danger to the poor and the young” (p. 5).
* If the author is not named in the signal phrase, place the author’s name, the year, and the page number in parentheses after the quotation: (Critser, 2003, p. 5).

* Follow this basic format for summaries and paraphrases, as well.  

* If the author is unknown, mention the work’s title in the signal phrase or give the first word or two of the title in the parenthetical citation. Titles of articles and chapters are put in quotation marks; titles of books and reports are italicized.
Children struggling to control their weight must also struggle with the pressures of television advertising that, on the one hand, encourages the consumption of junk food and, on the other, celebrates thin celebrities (“Television,” 2002).
List of References
* See the handout that I passed out weeks ago.

* Alphabetize entries in the list of references by authors’ last names; if a work has no author, alphabetize it by its title.

* The first element of each entry is important because citations in the text of the paper refer to it and readers will be looking for it in the alphabetized list.

* The date of publication appears immediately after the first element of the citation.

* In APA style, titles of books are italicized; titles of articles are neither italicized nor put in quotation marks. 



Howard, K. R. (2007). Childhood overweight: Parental perceptions and readiness for change. The Journal of School Nursing, 23, 73-79. Retrieved from http://jsn.sagepub.com/

Watson, P. (2008, October 19). Biofuel boom endangers orangutan habitat. Los Angeles Times. Retrieved from http://www.latimes.com/

What causes Alzheimer’s disease? (2008). Retrieved from http://www.memorystudy.org/alzheimers_causes.htm


Conclusions
* So what?  Why should anybody care?

Revision Plan
*What do you still need to work on for this to be a strong paper?


Looking Forward:
Monday, December 2

* Final paper due at the beginning of class.  Bring 1 printed copy of your final paper.  You will not be allowed to turn it in after the class has begun. 

* Final presentations to the class.
- First, you will need to spend some time discussing how you choose this topic.  Why did this problem interest you?  Once you have explained WHY you were initially interested in this problem, you need to actually present the situation to us.  Outline what you found to be the problem, either locally or more globally. Discuss your most relevant research.  Also, share with us your proposal and overall conclusion.
- This should be prepared, planned and rehearsed.  Know what you are going to say before you walk into our classroom.  Project - let us hear your lovely voice.
- You may use visuals, notes, drawings, song and dance...anything you would like to get your point across.
- Spend 8-10 minutes presenting and be prepared for questions and feedback from the class.


Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Week 12 - November 20

Meet in Sangren 2330, the computer lab.

Vocab.

Chapter 6.  Activities 8, 9, and 10

Workshop First Rough Draft
*Pass your draft around to your group members.
*Writer: Read your draft out loud.
*Listeners: Listen carefully to the draft.  Make notes on the draft where you detect grammar errors.  Also, make note where you are confused by something.  Make notes about places where you need more information or detail.
*Once the writer has finished reading the draft out loud, discuss the paper and ways it could be made stronger in a group.
*Repeat this for each group member.

Revision Plan
*What do you still need to work on for this to be a strong paper?
*Who is this paper intended for?


Looking Forward:
Friday, November 22
*2nd draft of your essay must be uploaded to ELearning dropbox or emailed if the dropbox is not working

Monday, November 25
* Meet in Sangren 2330
*Bring 3 copies of your 2nd draft to class on Monday, November 25

Monday, December 2
* Final paper due at the beginning of class.  Bring 1 printed copy of your final paper.
* Final presentations to the class.

Monday, November 18, 2013

Week 12 - November 18

Vocab

Workshop First Rough Draft
*Pass your draft around to your group members.
*Writer: Read your draft out loud. 
*Listeners: Listen carefully to the draft.  Make notes on the draft where you detect grammar errors.  Also, make note where you are confused by something.  Make notes about places where you need more information or detail.
*Once the writer has finished reading the draft out loud, discuss the paper and ways it could be made stronger in a group.
*Repeat this for each group member.

Revision Plan
*What do you still need to work on for this to be a strong paper?
*Who is this paper intended for?


Looking Forward:
Wednesday, November 20
*Meet in Sangren 2330.  Be prepared to work on your second draft.
*Read Chapter 6 in College Writing Skills.  Complete activities 8, 9, and 10
Friday, November 22
*2nd draft of your essay must be uploaded to ELearning dropbox or emailed if the dropbox is not working
*Bring 3 copies of your 2nd draft to class on Monday, November 25

Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Week 11 - November 13

Vocab

College Writing Skills ch 4 - activities 2, 4, 7, 8, and 9
College Writing Skills ch 22 - activities 2 and 3

Introductions
Work on first drafts

Looking Forward:
Friday, November 15 
* Post first draft to ELearning site, under the 1st Draft/Rough Draft section.  If that is difficult you must email the draft to me.  This is due by Friday.
Monday, November 18
* Bring 3 copies of your rough draft.  These must be typed out and ready to go immediately upon the beginning of class.

Sunday, November 10, 2013

Week 11 - November 11

Meet in Sangren, Lab 2330
 
Review Ch 4 in College Writing Skills.  Complete activities 2,4,7,8, and 9.

 
Thesis and outline review.  
Pass your draft out to 5 people.  Read your thesis out loud and discuss how well it works.   Read through each person's thesis before you move on to the outline. 

Spend some time looking at your peers' outlines.  Make notes and comments regarding the clarity and how other areas could be improved or expanded.  Once you have silently read and written comments about each draft, open the conversation back up to the group about each letter.

Spend time writing and drafting on the computers.

Looking Forward:
Read ch 22 in College Writing Skills.  Complete activities 2 and 3.
Keep working on your rough draft.  The first draft will be uploaded to ELearning on Friday, November 15. 
 

Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Week 10 - November 6

Fragments

Review  ch 24, activities 1 (1,2,3), 4, 5, and 7

Review ch 3, activities 1, 2, 5, 8, 14, 18 (numbers 2,3,4) and 19.

Celebration of Knowledge - Fragments and Chapter 3. 

"Why Women Aren't Funny"  
Get in groups and discuss the structure of the arguement.  What is the thesis?  What are his reasons to support the thesis.  What specific examples and proof does he provide to support his reasons?  Create a list of these answers.  

Writing your own thesis statement:
Take a look at your idea and also the rough outline from Monday.  Write a thesis statement for the paper you are building.  Consider these characteristics:
* It states yoru topic and focus.
* It gives an overview of yoru supporting points, which are logically connected to your focus.
* It gives enough information without too much detail.
* It uses correct grammar and precise vocabularly.

Looking Forward:
Monday, November 11
*Meet in Sangren, Lab 2330
* Read Ch 4 in College Writing Skills.  Complete activities 2,4,7,8, and 9.
* Finish your outline and thesis statement.  Bring 6 copies of the thesis and outline to class. 

Sunday, November 3, 2013

Week 10 - November 4

Vocab Word

Chapter 24 in College Writing Skills.  
    * Activities 1 (number 1,2,3), 4, 5, and 7

Argument Powerpoint
Effective Argumentative Outlines


Looking Forward:
Bring research to class on Wednesday.
Read chapter 3 in College Writing Skills.  Complete activities 1, 2, 5, 8, 14, 18 (numbers 2,3,4) and 19.
Read chapter 24 in College Writing Skills.  Complete activities 1 (number 1,2,3), 4, 5, and 7
Read "Why Women Aren't Funny"  
Bring research and rough outline that you began in Monday's class.